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    Talking A very lovely Poem: Online Addiction Poem

    You just awake, your eyes are still shut
    Still cant quite focus, still draggin your butt
    You know you need coffee, can taste that first sip
    You wait for the maker and put the mug to your lip


    The feeling is warm, just what you need
    But you know you need more and its something to read
    The paper you say? No, dont think so. Not it...
    It's much more exciting, you cant wait to "click"...


    You boot up your 'puter, you click that icon...
    Can't keep from grinning, you're really turned on!
    When the voice says "Welcome", your heart skips a beat!!
    You know your addicted ... all the friends that you'll meet.


    And then you see it, you wait with a stare....
    The mail box lights up!! "You've got mail" waiting there!!
    OH, what a feeling!! You look with delight!
    You hoped you'd have mail and you knew you were right!!


    So you go thru the mail knowing this is the "Best"..
    Reading this reading that ... as you go thru the rest.
    Some you give the "delete" key, others get your first click
    You know you must hurry, you gotta be quick!


    It is then that you hear it, you can't wait to see
    Your heart gets a flutter, who's name will it be?
    And then there it is, covering part of the screen
    The sweet little sound ... Oh, you know what that means!!!

    "Quick mail check" you promised, you said in your mind.
    But you just got an IM and your pressing for time!
    You know that you want to and respond you will
    So you stop what your doing and go for the thrill!

    You "LOL" and "BRB", give kisses and Hugs...
    You type and send words, refilling your mug
    You give your good friend your attention and time
    So that quick little mail check turns to hours online!




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    Default Re: A very lovely Poem: Online Addiction Poem

    Thanks for your info, I know a lovely poem named The Solitary Reaper by Wordsworth.
    Last edited by apple; 12-16-2009 at 12:00 AM.

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    Default Really A very lovely Poem

    Nice one, Roi, rightly describes the addicted on-line generations.

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    Default Re: A very lovely Poem: Online Addiction Poem

    Nice... very lovely...
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    Default Re: A very lovely Poem: Online Addiction Poem

    What a lovely poem.

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    Default Re: A very lovely Poem: Online Addiction Poem

    oh, good
    really the lovely poem

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    Default Re: A very lovely Poem: Online Addiction Poem

    LOL -I can relate to this! Great poem
    Don't find fault, find a remedy. Old Chinese Fortune Cookie



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